Principal Tonya King denied Jim Stack’s request to grow his hair out for a charity, Stack’s will be heading to the school board on monday to debate on this subject.
King said,
“Had I have approved,then i would have students breaking dress code everyday” but King said there are other ways Stacks could help Locks Of Love. Stacks had applied as a donor and that he has got permission from his mother to donate the only thing standing in his way was the decision of the schools board at the meeting.
When asking Bill Valdez the school board president about the situation he said,
they will discuss the issue at the school board meeting next week.
Gilbert Castillo the student council president thinks differently about the problem saying
“I think that it’s cool that Jim wants to do this.” He said that Stacks felt helpless through this whole ordeal. Also states “girls have long hair,and no one is distracted.”
Gisel Roco,president of Locks Of Love states “I was moved by Jims to donate his hair” Roco says that they are desperately in need for human hair. Every month they receive about 200 requests for hair and they have to turn down 150 of those requests.
Stacks mother says “I am proud of Jim” she is happy that her son wants to help a group that means a lot for their family.
Jasmine Stacks sister finally got her wig and was happier than ever and later on she got a clean health bill that she had been clear of all cancer.
“When the wig came in she became alive again.”
Principal Tonya King denied Jim stack’s request to grow his hair out for a charity, therefore Stack’s will be heading to the school board on Monday to debate on this subject. King states CAPITALIZE STACK. GET RID OF THEREFORE AND WILL BE IN YOUR LEAD.
“Had I have approved,then i would have students breaking dress code everyday” but King says there are other ways Stacks could help Locks Of Love. Stacks had applied as a donor and that he has got permission from his mother to donate the only thing standing in his way was the decision of the schools board at the meeting. EACH TRANSITION NEEDS TO BE ITS OWN PARAGRAPH. SHOULD BE KING SAID. ALWAYS USE SAID NEVER STATES OR COMMENTED. ATTRIBUTION ALWAYS FOLLOWS THE FIRST SENTENCE OF THE QUOTE.
When asking Bill Valdez the school board president about the situation he said THIS IS NOT A TRANSITION. YOU NEED TO GIVE US FACTUAL INFORMATION.
“I can’t comment on this issue right now” he states that they will discuss the issue at the school board meeting next week.
Gilbert Castillo the student council president thinks differently about the problem saying
“I think that it’s cool that Jim wants to do this.” He said that Stacks felt helpless through this whole ordeal. Also states “girls have long hair,and no one is distracted.”
Gisel Roco,president of Locks Of Love states “I was moved by Jims to donate his hair” Roco says that they are desperately in need for human hair. Every month they receive about 200 requests for hair and they have to turn down 150 of those requests.
Stacks mother says “I am proud of Jim” she is happy that her son wants to help a group that means a lot for their family.
Jasmine Stacks sister finally got her wig and was happier than ever and later on she got a clean health bill that she had been clear of all cancer. YOU NEED TO END ON A QUOTE.
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